Hey Lounge, lets throwdown some rhymes

[enjoilax]

Please choose the appropriate forum for this topic. Thank you. Just make a rhyme and pass it on.

Rules:
1. No swearing!
2. Italicize your rhymes!

Back in the day
Always pulled ace of spades
New to this game
but when i leave it won't be the same
I started from zero
hoping one day to be like the metal hero
I'll stop for now
so you can see me bow
for all the next posters running
they'll post under me, like they're up and coming

(Terrible i know, but i just wanted to start it :))

[JustinHermary]

Good job and good idea. :D

[enjoilax]

:( no one wants to rhyme? *sigh*

all you have to do is make rap
it ain't hard like that
Its pretty freaking easy like Kraft Mac
iLounge can bring from old school
to the new age fools
I'm sure they can rhyme
any day or time
so c'mon ya'll rock the mic!

(another crap one to get ANYONE posting)

Advice: figure out what you are doing before you do it:
i.e.: will your Rhyme scheme be:
A/A/B/B/C/C (and so on)

or

A/B/A/B/C/D/C/D

Also: I like to think of a beat when i do this.

[skateboarderx24]

orange........well ive got nothing

[iPod_Greg]

Originally posted by skateboarderx24
orange........well ive got nothing

haha good one....


'k how's this?

this thread was started by enjiolax
c'mon y'all let's give him some slack

just make a rhyme, doesn't have to be good....
just throw down some words, you really should

don't feel nervous, don't feel shame
just join in this fabulous game


There, how's that enjoi? Hope it helps!

--Greg

[enjoilax]

Originally posted by iPod_Greg
haha good one....


'k how's this?

this thread was started by enjiolax
c'mon y'all let's give him some slack

just make a rhyme, doesn't have to be good....
just throw down some words, you really should

don't feel nervous, don't feel shame
just join in this fabulous game


There, how's that enjoi? Hope it helps!

--Greg

Hey that rhyme was fresh
kinda old school, but wasn't the best
At least you aren't a sucka MC
according to Kool Moe Dee
When the rhymes are fly
the words make me high
its nothing like dope
but in the way that i do not mope
So when with this post
theres lots of hope
that some one else will bust more rhymes
so we can be hypnotized

[Emultion_Rawks]

I really can't rap,
I can't rap for crap,
But I'll give it a try,
Though I don't know why.
Emultion_Rawks is my name,
(((pERSON : aBOVE))) is my game,
and although this is bad,
you ought to be glad,
that I ain't drunk,
cos I'll tell ya, that if I was drunk,
you'd be outta luck,
cos man o man, would my rap suck!

Whatd'ya think? :)

[Angelraine]

This was very amusing
but slightly confusing
i don't see why more iPodders ain't doing
the rappin thing
play this game
my rap is lame
but i'm still playin

peace out!

[Macromedia]

I got no rhyme
And I got no rhythm
I got worse lyrics then sewer grim
I don't know what to do
I don't know what to say
All the way I try to do freestyle

[melsmusic]

Most rappers are growin them curls
But this momma's gonna give it a whirl
Not sure if I'll get very far
nough to buy me a brand new car
but when the hip hop beats
better start your feet
or you'll be left with the geeks
The boom box is playing your tune
on the radio it's half past noon
You never thought you'd hear
your tune so near
the hood broke out with a cheer

[Jackus]

This rhyming game is all the craze
I really have nothing better to do than this
All I'm doing is giving my screen an endless gaze
But don't any of you try and give me dis. (:p)

I wanna see what the next person's is
'Cos it can't be much better than mine
What mine is is none of your bizzz...
But it will cost a fair dime.

My god that was appaling
I dont know what I was thinking
My brain just kept on stalling
It looks as if I'd been DRINKING!!!

[swy32x]

Here goes my durrty durrty south rap.

So I gizzot these fat rims foh ma cah
They a 20 maybe a twenty-fo
Rolling in ma new benz hand out tha windoh
Got three #####es in the back suckinh on ma fingahs *OH!*

As much as I try to listen to Southern Rap thats all I tend to hear.

Oh! Before I go heres my fiddy cent rap -

Ayyo b I got shot up like nine times
I'm the man, I got tha illest lines
I'm on a mission with G-Unit to get me my cheddar
Get in my ####ing way you gone meet my beretta

Well, maybe I'm not as wack as him. And I don't think I said the n-word or mother effer enough times. So, ready to pay me my millions? ;)

[Jackus]

Yo snowy, that attempt wos crap
Maybe yo shuld giv up an give yo-self a slap
Because that was the worst piece of rap
I have heard whilst wearing my cap

This kinda rhyme is what ya need
I bet ya anyfin this style will breed
Cos its the only one that really dus da deed
Yea, this rap is so good I'm gonna make it into a CREED!

[swy32x]

A visionary of what you transpire to be
I articulate it so you can't confuse it,
Or try and misconstrue the true meaning
Don't be dabbling in the class you don't deserve to be in
I'll be staying on my grind, relentless, you're off in the mountains skiing
My class is higher, this is Gucci, caviar, the messiah flow
While you're lagging, 6 year old, first grade talent
You look up to me while you amount to nothing
Toes out of the swimming pool son, fighting a losing battle
Take these 16 bars and study it, *beat drops* *acapella* come back when you can rhyme about more than trucker caps and self inflicted injury, Junior.

[Jackus]

Yo man, that rhyme was sick
So in reward you get a big lick..
But dont go gettin' bigheddid
Or I will get your rhyme an shred it

So the moral of dis story is so
Yo really have to be good at going "yo yo yo"
Bruvers and Sisturs listen to me
Snowy rhymes are like dog pee..... (running out of rhymes ;))

Here is my best one
Its really kickin and fun
Why don't you all have a go
Come on now! Don't be slow! :D

[Macromedia]

Those rhymes are pretty good Jackus and Snowy

[Jackus]

LOL @ that, my rhymes are bad
I just find a word that rhymes: I'm really sad
Come on now Snowy we're waiting for you
Come out of hiding, and do what you do!

[superman56]

jack, you got sum good ryhmes,
but they aint worth a dime,
your sig says your name like ninty nine times!
come on jack, jack, jack, try to attack,
you aint got nothin' and thats a fact!

LOL :D